The sparkle in your eyes
The twitch of your lips
The touch of your hand
That bend of the hips
The softness of your hijaab
The crudeness of your style
The smell of your hair
That flowed like the Nile
The panic in your voice
The passion in your kiss
The wetness of your tongue
That face that I miss
Its not just this, believe me
To you, theres a lot more.
I love you more than you know
I just hope you know that for sure.
5 comments:
nice.
Ok seriously i know cliched comments make ya wanna scream.
im too inhuman too feel emotions any more.Bah.[weird mood prevails]
Nice work!!
hey,
do update sometime.really like yer poetry.neat stuff.keep it up!
and please that does not mean key i want ya to read my blog zabardastee.lol thats wat they all want when they comment rite?.lol.just keep writing i like readiin yers.
hey..see i knew ud think that.i was so not wanting you to read my blog i hate random people reading my blog too,and the vibes were actually supposed to be implying 'good work,like reading yer work'.[there i prove u wrong]ive never really read urdu poetry that much except when i had to take urdu..so its a new for me..i kinda like reading yer urdu poetry its different.English..hmm isnt that stuff what they all write.i mean i think everyone on this frikkin planet can write english with the usual cliched 'depressions' and 'i so wanna die'[i know i can]. yeah quality writing shld be appreciated.
conclusion: just wanted to read a different something.
Orkut? wat da hell is that?!?!
Nah im kidding another 'stale' hangout.yeah i am.
oh and "hope" is a nice piece of work.
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